Well if you want I suppose that the one thing that struck me was that the were limbs were very thin and slightly disproportionate to their bodies, but that's just my opinion. So maybe try thickening their bodies and limbs a bit and see how that works for you alright bud.
thank you and thank you for voicing your opinion in a respectful way. Most artist I think are afraid of criticism because so many people just say an opinion and dont offer way for the artist to improve. Artist on the internet need to understand when they make a piece of art it is not for them it is for whoever is viewing it. Oh well thank you for taking the time and pointing out ways I can improve.
Thanks I was surprised no one had done this before the video this is based on has 10.000 views and the voice-actress does it in sweetie belles voice Its a good funny video a friend showed me and it was some what inspiring in a funny way.
DeadSpace is what Started it all for me!! god I Love that game!!! xD I even Have a huge ass Dead Space 2 promotion poster on my wall. ^^ Issaic Clark and his bad ass Rig. The Dead Space games rock! You'd be doing your self a disservice by not finishing it! And sure, they're scary, but that's why I love about them. They're mentally challenging. I Love testing my metal. Only Survival Horror game that ever got the best of me was "Siren: Blood Curse". I just couldn't do it. And believe me, I Tried Hard. xD but really, I did.
well I edited a static image and stacked them like stairs and made them like a gradient in opacity lightest to darkest and made the eraser tool have a noise effect and was not to strong and dabbled it on the edges of each layer to get that effect I hope this helps =C I came up with it on the spot not like I watched a video for this xD